New Outline

This is our updated full outline for the entire sequence based off of our Test Shoot review 

The highlights colour code which shots Joy and I will draw for our group storyboard.

New Outline:

• Girl is scavenging around Junkyard

• She comes across a car and opens the door before crawling in

• She pulls up her pant leg to reveal a bloody wound

• She then rips off one of her long sleeves and puts one of her hot wiring tools in her mouth

• She ties the sleeve around the wound and tightens it, wincing in pain

• She then sits for a few seconds before deciding to try to hotwire the car (more detail in independent research task)

• She grows frustrated as this fails 

• We gradually hear a very quiet buzzing sound from the distance

• And then the sound disappears, everything returns to silence

• She then goes back to connecting the wires, quietly this time

• The sound then returns, much louder this time, it grows even louder to reveal it as the revving of a motorcycle

• She gets an intense look of pure horror on her face and sits fully paralysed for a few seconds 

• Just as the revving suddenly gets significantly closer, she gets it together and throws herself out of the car 

• She sprints as fast as she possibly can, limping in pain, over to a run-down looking shack

• She jumps inside and slams the door shut 

• She quickly crouches down with her back against the door, her hands pressed against her ears and her eyes shut tight

• The sounds of the motorcycle quickly approach the shack 

• The sounds slow in pace as they reach the doorway from the outside 

• The motorcycle starts to circle around the shack

• The girl jolts from shock and follows the sound with her head as it passes by every wall 

• The sound then suddenly drowns out and somewhat disappears

• She sits completely shivering for a few seconds and cautiously takes her hands off her ears

• She quietly lifts herself up and turns around to creak the door open

• She peeks outside and scans her surroundings before fully opening the door to reveal an empty scene

• She steps back inside and leans against the wall, she sighs in relief

• All of a sudden a battleaxe crashes into the shot right beside her 

• She jumps back and screams

• The killer then pulls the axe back out of the ground and holds it above his shoulder, ready to swing it back around to kill her

• We then look in from outside the open door, we hear her screaming as she falls to the floor of the doorway